Talk:Monster Girl Quest: Demon Burst!/@comment-86.18.226.31-20131130235201/@comment-4878757-20131201224101

It's just a bit wordy and seems to be more of a fanfic page than actually detailing the project, plus there's so much info on what you're going to do, not what has been done. There's more information on your universe and original characters than there is on the project from a real life perspective. I mean, the reason I asked a "silly" question about where the comic would be is because that information isn't even in the page, that's kind of the first thing you want on there.

Figuratively you need a home for your comic before you make a page, and you need a published page of a comic before story details even relevant to put up. Just use the pages to show what has actually been finished. :)

The page just needs some changes;

When you look at a project in development you don't put up the story onto a page, you want the important information like timescales of how long it will take, how regularly it will be released, what or where it will published on, important links and the like. Those are the important elements that you need to tell us about the project.

Synopsis is also important too, but it's better to keep it brief, especially if the project is pretty young. That story stuff really needs scaling down, you don't need that much to set the scene.

What you don't need on this page is the huge list of characters and monsters, or even about the demons. Even when the comic is released you just need short bios for main characters.