User blog comment:Zepekinio25/Monster Girl Quest : Servant of the monster lord/@comment-27048913-20170304085753

I'm testing the game with the newest patch.

SPOILERS --

I am doing the Fear Her path, that is my favourite path by the way.

That sayd, i'm pleased with the combats. Imp is no longer bugged, it's an hard battle but she can be defeated.

About the plot. In the behemoth cavern i was not really too much pleased with the choices you gave us, because Nolwen had what i call it, a " Luka moment ". You know, being the knight in the shining armor that fight for the sake of goodness...without thinking too much about the current situation ?

That's the problem. I mean : ok, some humans captured a monster child to use it as an hostage to lure Alice. On the other side, we have monsters that enslave mens, kills men, devour men, rape men.

Nolwen just forgot all of that and labeled these humans " monsters " because they use a child as an hostage ? Come on, it's not like monsters are saints. It's a war.

That's why i call it a " Luka moment ". Luka, as Nolwen, would only focus on the fact that a child was kidnapped. And anything else does not matter. And it's funny how fast Nolwen forgets that monsters are his enemy. Last time i checked, he was a slave.

It's all in all a naive view of the situation, that does not honor your great project.

In short --> you gave only 2 choiches. The kidnappers deserve to be punished or killed.

But if you want to create a path for a more...mature Nolwen, you " could " add also the choice of simply talking with them. Solve the situation with words, or trading the child with something else ( like Alice). And if they do not accept, let Tamamo fight them while Nolwen simply refuse to harm a human.

( In the end it would not matter because they have to die by the reaper's hand in Nolwen's body. But nonetheless...)

Oh, in the Fear her path i really like the net of relationships that are being created with Tamamo, Nolwen and Reaper